Writing for love is a pas

He doesn't know, that I need him. Need is a word that has to be fulfilled. Passion is so strong, It will always kill. The definition of love is a ...

Vernon, all of my work isn't ever good enough for you, is it? Actually, I thought that compared to my other pieces that this is not a navel-gazing piece. Maybe ...

Well, Thought that this was very original and unique. I, personally, liked the 'Would you" phrase being repeted over and over again. I would be your friend, too.

"When You're Gone"- Avril Lavigne

Wow. Okay, you have a lot of grammar issues going on in this, uhh, piece, I should say. Your 'i's' need capitalizing. You have some run-on sentences, too. When someone ...

Ahh! Next chapter is a must to this story! You are a quite talented writer. Did this happen to you? The use of description was awesome. I especailly like the ...

Wow. I mean, wow. I really need to read the next part. Seriously. this was awesome. Very good use of description.

The wonder and excitement flow through me, as I see you on the soccer field. I think about the time our moist lips would meet, and the way your back ...

Thanks everyone. I really like this poem actually. Oh, and Also thanks for not ripping it to shred, with the exception of, of course, Vernon. No offense Vernon. :roll:

Okay, as far as getting your feelings out, It's awesome. But I hate to say it, because I hate when other people say it, I scream, but where's the rhythm? ...

Thanks Eva. I really didn't really think about it that way. My day Has Brightened

Whoa. I liked this story almost as much as my i-pod. Wierd. The plot was really good and the romantic drama was...Amazing! I love romantic drama. Umm, it was kinda ...

Oh my god. Dude, you are talented. This is one of your best stories yet, but the anticipation of it IS KILLING ME!! 10/10, just because the arguement was funny! ...

Your idea was simply ravishing. Although I didn't get the concept of it, I have yet to see anyone write a poem like this before. Very original. Some of the ...

9/10 makes me laugh everytime!